You... don't... want me...

Rookie (9-November-1994 / QLD)

Life! ! ! - Poem by You... don't... want me...

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Life is pain
Life is sorrow
Life can always end tomorrow
Life is the begining not the end
Life is going around the bend
Life is surprise
Life is fear
Life, is not knowing what is near
Life is sight, sound and touch
Life is in all of us
Life is laughter
Life is shame
Life can always begin again
Life is a circle going round and round
Life continues after we’re in the ground…


Comments about Life! ! ! by You... don't... want me...

  • Rookie Luis Ruiz (10/9/2009 8:40:00 PM)

    this is a good poem about life.... (Report) Reply

    3 person liked.
    2 person did not like.
  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (6/18/2009 1:05:00 AM)

    deep and significant /fine (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deeba Naser (6/8/2009 1:20:00 PM)

    It is a fantastic peom! has true meaning, well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (6/2/2009 2:23:00 AM)

    'Life is a circle going round and round
    Life continues after we’re in the ground…'

    Excellent write Janay. I love this poem.
    Beautiful observation on life.10 with love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (4/19/2009 2:58:00 AM)

    Your attitude toward life is very cynical for one so young, but your poem expresses your adolescent disappointment very well. Might I suggest you use the word 'beginning' instead of 'begin' in line four? Your final couplet is a most satisfying conclusion to the poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Angelica Skye (4/18/2009 8:51:00 PM)

    I like how on some of the lines it goes from a negative to a positive, it works well.x (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, May 8, 2009


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