You... don't... want me...

Rookie (9-November-1994 / QLD)

I Love.... - Poem by You... don't... want me...

I love the sun shining all day
I love watching kids play
I love hearing a beautiful song
I love it when lines aren’t very long
I love it when you smile at me
I love to swim in the sea
I love it when we laugh real loud
I love to be in a really big crowd
I love the sun, the moon and sky
I love a nice home made pie
I love the fact that love is every where
And I really love having long brown hair


Comments about I Love.... by You... don't... want me...

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (6/18/2009 5:04:00 AM)

    Sense of joy and jubilant reflects in the poem.Hi Janay, you're in a whirlpool of happiness I reckon. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie *~*happily desturbed*~* ? (6/17/2009 5:18:00 AM)

    Janay L. you hav made the dark one smile....10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,980 Points Kee Thampi (6/17/2009 3:57:00 AM)

    wish to be with this
    I love to swim in the sea
    I love it when we laugh real loud
    I love to be in a really big crowd
    I love the sun, the moon, sky (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, August 7, 2009


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