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Death Is Peace



Death is peaceful,
An escape from life

Life I harder, that’s the shame
Life is sorrow, Life is pain.

With life there comes, feelings,
Some of which are terrible things

When you die you feel no more
So really, it is the living we should feel sorry for

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 02 June 2009

Janay, life is only Now, yes now this very moment as you read. Its the past that makes us miserable or fear of future things. If you sit quiet without thoughts you will be happy. Who knows what death brings?

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Bhuvana R 02 June 2009

skills when filtered thro' perverted and biased believes they end up in superstition Life is a journey when your stopping comes you will get down; when mine comes i will; so dear child please change you attitude the world is a mirror what you show it will reflect you are skilled...do it from a positive platform

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Afzal Shauq 09 May 2009

no doubt... poem is very sweet but I say death is not peace but running from life and defeat... peace relates to soul and soul relates to other souls..like heart to heart smiling term is peace and we have to work for meace..as I am know as peace wisher poet and trying to promote peace in the way of my famous say...(((a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq)))) ... here is my ID afzalshauq@yahoo.com

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 24 April 2009

emotions in this poem are truly magnificent..great expressions! well done!

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