(11/29/93 / In A Hospital)

What do you think this poem is about?

Life

life is rough
life can die
life is not what i want it to be
the days come crashing as i run from you
life pulls away quicker then you can grab my wrist
life doesnt last the pain you put on me
life is gonna take me away
life will defeat my immortal fate
you cant stop this life from running
life will fade and you will be here while i'm gone
life never thought death would be so good
but from far away its even better
life says its last words and i'm walking through ETERNITY...

Submitted: Friday, February 15, 2008
Edited: Saturday, September 12, 2009

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  • Kye Kurion (5/3/2008 3:43:00 AM)

    Personally I believe life is good, but your expression makes this a really great poem.

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  • Stephanie Buchanan (2/23/2008 10:36:00 PM)

    i agree with you and this poem is good keep writing

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