'I'M Sorry' Poem by Harley My Last Name
'I'M Sorry'
I'm sorry i cant be who you want me to.
I'm sorry i'm not the perfect daughter.
I'm sorry i cant always show my emotions.
I'm sorry i fall to fast.
I'm sorry i cant live my life the way you want.
I'm sorry i dont give up that easy on love.
I'm sorry i get mad for all the wrong reasons.
I'm sorry i loose interest.
I'm sorry i like the night sky.
I'm sorry i'm not like you.
I'm sorry i live a rollercoaster.
I'm sorry i dont have high expectations in life.
I'm sorry my lifes not made of goals.
I'm sorry i hide the real me.
I'm sorry i dont want to be famous.
I'm sorry i cant be part of a crowd.
I'm sorry i like being alone.
I'm sorry my musics to dark.
I'm sorry my love feels so far away.
I'm sorry i was made to be different.
I'm sorry i was made to be imperfect.
I'm sorry i cant love my life.
I'm sorry i cant be perfect.
I'm sorry i cant even hate people anymore.
I'm sorry i cant be like the rest of the world.
great work harley! The repitition, like Greenwolfe said, was excellent and made me feel as if you really wanted to tell everyone your sorry. Expression was great, and i could see if the sadness pouring the words, as usual, excellent job!
I liked this as well. Repetition is a good thing in poetry or any writing that needs to be remembered. I would advise everyone to read a poem of mine called 'Sorry' because it takes a different view of this word, but this is just fine. GW62
one word....awesome. i love it. excellent job. two thumbs up.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/16/2024 7:30:59 AM # 1.0.0.1119
great poem.. the repeat of the of the words 'I'm sorry' gives this poem a musical effect and i really enjoyed reading this poem. keep it up! ! !