Life Poem by Sara Amidon

Life

Rating: 5.0


Life…
How wonderful it is.
Where people just don’t get you
Those Christian figures hate you…
If you’re not perfect…
Can we be denied our integrity?
Can we actually LOSE that too?
It’s unfair how we are treated
Like dogs just shoved aside
Or slaves, yet alive are
Whipped
With words that hurt your soul
This damn society
Is falling to the ground
Where it mumbles and crumbles
Breaks down into rubble
Among the hatred hell touches
Every… single… part… of this world
Blazing fires
Screaming horror
IS THIS WHAT WE’RE CONDEMNED TO BE!
Screwed up figures
Disfigured human beings
Shown what we’re worth
Yet nothing at all…

-this poem is not against any religion sorry if i offended anyone i am christian myself.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blue Eyes 27 December 2008

yeah, its life who teaches u to say such stuff, i like ur poem it has a lot of wisdom in it.

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Raindreamer Hippy 25 May 2008

Sometimes I wonder why this world can seem so horrible.

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Meggie Gultiano 21 January 2008

this is an emotional write of yours, Sara..Just focus on the brighter side of life. We are not to judge, but the Lord is.Keep on doing what is right, and the Lord will be happy about it. I love the way you write, comes from your heart.Love you.. God bless, Meggie

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Jeannie Ann Clark 20 January 2008

Very expressive in your writing...shows the frustration with suffering, sickness, death; soon to end as I write about...thank you...keep writing.

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