Life Poem by Howard Johnson

Life

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To see in everyone I met
My little struggling self,

Always trying to do its best
Ever trusting who we are
Every day for us something new
Open minded for a diffrent view

Now never caring for what they new
This key of life I did forget
Upon a dusty shelf
Now it rests.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 12 September 2006

I think that laughter and excercise play a big part in happiness Thankyou Love duncan X

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Anna Cellmer 07 November 2006

Very well expressed I agree with every verse :) We are all just fellow passangers of this world so we have to smile and see friends around becuase we all share the same fate in life even if our ways to this are different quite

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Brian Dorn 11 November 2006

I suppose we all own the same key. Some of us let it collect dust, others open new doors with it every day. Great write, Howard! Brian

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Suzan Gumush 20 December 2006

Life is a testing time. Good verse. Best wishes suzan

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Moffat Mbuzi 16 April 2009

Im disappointed, it just ended like that....write a continued version

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Tsira Goge 16 April 2008

I like yours poems and its secret a line... I see deep grief... But the life will be poor without memoirs... The Past same the ancestor of the future... I wish you all good, Howard. Tsira

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Ben Gieske 30 March 2008

Nice way to put this. We certainly need to be reminded to be open minded. Everyone has something we can admire and benefit from.

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LaTisha Parkinson 23 March 2008

oh wow. this is, wow. hmmm....pick up the key, don't lt it gather anymore dust.

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Marci Made 07 March 2007

It is indeed difficult at times to take that 'key' down and open up......or even at time without a 'key'. Step by step, day by day is sometimes the only way.. I think you got is clear that life is something that 'can blow your socks off.' Ah, but then there is always hope that right around the corner we will find the good things. mm. :)

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