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Shalom Freedman

Freshman - 1,046 Points (Troy New York)

Let's Leave The 'Poems' Without Metaphors


LET’S LEAVE THE ‘POEMS’ WITHOUT METAPHORS

Let’s leave the ‘poems’ without metaphors
Bare and stark and original
Quiet and sleeping and still
The soothing poems the calming poems
The poems that even in the middle of the night
Let us sleep.
Let’s leave the poems without metaphors
And go back to the simple words
And let them say all they can by themselves
Until they become metaphors too.

Submitted: Friday, October 02, 2009

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