Let's Go To The Sea Again..... Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Let's Go To The Sea Again.....

Rating: 4.8


Let's go to the sea again, In a ship we built together
It's been long in the land, since we sailed around marine
The vast space of the sky is waiting down under the water
Where sun and moon takes the dip and turn again

You me and our shadow under the sun
Crawling on the waves of the past into the future
Where our destiny is waiting to embrace
Pure in ideas and pure in thoughts

Leaving tangibles behind, into the world of intangibles
Erasing urbane intelligence to the naivety of humane
Lived enough under the umbrella of hatred
And raising the flags of the community

Now it's time to redeem ourselves
And rediscover the lost joy of the life
Business has gained nothing for us
Let's trade love for the life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 09 July 2020

Awe inspiring poem. Straight to my fav. poems.

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M Asim Nehal 06 July 2020

Thank u so much Geetaji and Kumarmaniji, your comments are equally fantastic and ever motivating.

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Indira Renganathan 06 July 2020

Outstanding...each stanza is beautiful crafted very meaningful.... 'Business has gained nothing for us Let's trade love for the life.'....very inspiring 10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 July 2020

You me and our shadow under the sun amazingly crawl in life's row on this Earth. We have to move towards sea again. If we are like rivers, then Allah, our God is is sea for us. We have to move towards him. Now it's time to redeem ourselves. We have to redeem us from both pollution and sins. This poem has deep philosophy within. This is an excellent poem very well penned.

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Thank you so much Asim ji for this wonderful poem....Lets go into the sea again! With pure ideas and pure thoughts...redeem ourselves and rediscover ourselves with faith and love. Beautiful as always! ......10 So happy that you visited my page. Thank you again!

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