Let Me Be Alive Poem by ROCHISH MON
Let Me Be Alive
You are my song, let me be a singer
You are my poem, let me be a poet
You are my dawn, let me have the shine
You are my breeze, let me have it flowing
You are my earth, let me dwell
You are my sky, let me fly
You are my river, let me swim
You are my path, let me go on
You are my taste, let me replete with it
You are my power, let me be powerful
You are my love, let me be a lover
You are my life, let me be alive
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4/30/2024 9:05:18 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Love the essential content of the poem, and expression. It's just the repetition of You are my.. takes away from the musical sound of it and bogs it down. Try condensing some sentences and putting them together. Would love to read it again after rewrite - let me know okay? Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn