Let Her Sleep Poem by Subbaraman N V

Let Her Sleep

Rating: 5.0


Her happy world
A lovely mould
For a scream she gets her food
For another she gets all the good
Cute toys all around
She gets sleep abound
Sleeps as she loves
Screams as she likes!
World of love, world of joy
Till it becomes a broken toy
Let her sleep undisturbed
Lest on age can't be unperturbed!
She may not be spared
Of
Pleasure of love
Pain of its failure
Evil of dowry
Pangs of treachery
Spasm of sexism
Childhood marriage
Agony of miscarriage
Early widowhood
Cruelty of poverty
Vulturous eyes
Casting evil sight
At her long curly hair
And handsome features
Making her a helpless creature!
Let her sleep undisturbed
Amidst her toys duly clutched!
Before she blossoms
Let us hasten
A world order
That Respects women
Extols her virtues
Encourages equality
Ennobles the society!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashley Stone 04 April 2008

Well done, but I wish your poems felt more personal so you'd connect with readers on a deeper level.

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Abha Sharma 23 April 2008

The way you have brought the whole world in your lines is commendable…the society is made from us so we are responsible for all this ugliness…lets join hands to bring some change which is good for the complete race…Great composition and the ideology

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 November 2009

Let us hasten A world order That Respects women Extols her virtues Encourages equality Ennobles the society! .let us build the world order if equality regardless of gender discrimination.....10 read mine.. molestation bid............papa do youknow...papa you too? ? ?

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 11 September 2009

a very nice poem, this poem itself will make a woman happy, though people say that women has got equal rights, but still there are some basic problems faced by women, only when a women is able to walk out of her house alone at night without any problem can she call that she has got freedom....

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Seema Chowdhury 03 November 2008

a very nice and true reality shown in clear and direct words.

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Chitra - 28 June 2008

a wonderful way of bringing out the social issues women face in this so call modern world

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Rema Prasanna 01 May 2008

it is a great work, let her sleep peacefully under the wild world, good picturisation. wish our society change in this way. pls read my poem cries of a baby girl. Rgs

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Subbaraman N V

Subbaraman N V

Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India
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