Leave Poem by Pen Anthony

Leave

Rating: 5.0


In my heart you live
but in my life you dont
In my dreams you live
but in my wake you leave
In my mind you reign
but in my soul you rain
soaking my senses
choking my reason'
my heart embraces you
but my mind chases you
Leave - and leave my heart for me

Wednesday, February 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 February 2015

Reality or chimera, that could be the question, here...Simplistic yet satin smooth structural movement as well as a lyrically charged rhyme scheme...Solid Penning ~FjR~

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E Nigma 04 February 2015

Isn't it just like love to sneak on in and dismantle everything you know leaving you perplexed at how to put everything back together again? Very well crafted and precise an excellent poem.

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