Lay Bare Your Words.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Lay Bare Your Words....

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According to me
is Poetry full of hidden thoughts
something smallest wroughts

the greatest thoughts
till smallest wroughts but as far as I am concerned
is Poetry full of hidden truths

since thoughts hidden
are truths hidden
since we may not yell
the truths that lie in our heart
then we never tell

don´t you want to know
what that is
hidden thoughts in Poetry?
hidden truths in your heart?

well, my mum advised me
lay bare the words from your heart,
never hide the truths within
it is not that smart, honey....


©Sylvia Frances Chan

Pentecost Monday
the 10th of June 2019
@20.40 hrs.P.M. Dutch Time

Monday, June 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: honesty
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
well, my mum advised me
lay bare the words from your heart,
never hide the truths within
it is not that smart, honey....


©Sylvia Frances Chan

Pentecost Monday the 10th of June 2019
@20.40 hrs.P.M. Dutch Time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 10 June 2019

Sylvia, your poem lays bare your truths. Just like all of us. Wonderfully informed. Thank you.

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Thank you for your kind response to this poem. God´s Blessings be Greatest for you and your beloved family.Amen. I am happy that you visit my poem site. Precious words you left behind, Jane.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 June 2019

Yes! ! Poetry is the way of life! Full of hidden thoughts. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thank you for your response and comment. Your visit I like very much, Edward. God Bless you!

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Valsa George 17 June 2019

For speaking out truths, one needs courage! Your mother has given you the right orientation never to hide truths. The wisdom and ideals imparted by our parents even at an early age will stay deep rooted in us forever! I salute you and your dear mother, Sylvia!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 June 2019

Your mother must have been so proud of you and so happy knowing that you took by heart, mind and soul all the wonderful advice she had imparted to you . More importantly , you put into action those advice by sharing it to other people. Simply conveyed and beautifully written. Liked the lovely title, too.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 June 2019

A beautiful poem with a great message. Well conveyed and.composed. Thank you for sharing this poem and the wonderful thought of your beloved mother.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 June 2019

I agree with the great Poetess that sometimes in Poetry, truth is hidden. Sometimes poems are thought provoking that we will have to dig into the mind of the author the underlying meaning of what has been written. This is I think where the mystery of Poetry lies and sometimes a lot of people do not like Poetry because it is too deep to understand. A piece of poetry is subject to various interpretations that an ordinary layman is hard to understand.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 June 2019

A wonderful advice from a great and loving mother. So very true, We must always lay bare our thoughts from our heart. We must not hide the truth. Truth anyway will always come out. And as the saying goes, truth will set us free.

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