Last View Poem by ritty patnaik

Last View

Rating: 5.0


i look behind, and take in
the last scene.
left all loved ones, memories
and relationships!
big dropp of tear, like
the moon out side my window
the koel serenading,
the last tune.

i left behind
all the pleasure,
the false promises
life bestowed on me,
the awesome happiness,
as well my lonely existence.
to find myself,
in eternal game
of hide and seek.

with deep regret,
yet with longing eyes
left behind all.

in my freedom
from shackles of life,
i see transparent joy
clear as crystal
awaiting me
with open arms.

i am the morning star
staring to witness
the dew,
bathing in the
soft rays
of early sunrise.

transfixed, i embrace
this glorious moment
of union
like the waterlily,
and the moon!
the only witness,
is time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 26 July 2009

Ritty, this is really very beautiful, it is so full of gentle tones. Written by someone who has a great love for life. Warm wishes Bob

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rago rago 08 July 2009

tenderly written poem with tenderly heart......... let the rhythm flow and swing....

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