Last Night Love Came Poem by Saroj Padhi
Last Night Love Came
Last night Love came offering her hand
Wrapped in gossamer beams,
In silent breaths of moist dreams;
As I stood baring the petals of my soul
To a flow of slow dew drips;
She came oozing radiant love
With nectar in her pursed lips.
A river of compassion kept murmuring
In ceaseless ripples of love in her eyes,
Calming the surges of Tsunami
That at the depth of desire lies;
She was nameless every love
For which each creature
In a strange silence inwardly dies.
There was that love glistening in the eyes
That you so oft see in leaves' eyes,
When the delayed Sun
Under the cover of clouds hopelessly sighs.
The long desire of snow for a small spark,
Of wind to be caught in a meaningful flame,
Of something to melt into a sweet nothing
Of Time's yearning for an eternal timeless fling.
Of the desire lurking in eyes of sun to merge
Into an engulfing emptiness under sky's bower
Of Spring's desire to die into the loveliest flower
Under unexpected drops of passion-rain
Blissfully forgetful about all attendant pain.
Very well written, full of imagery and colors, the lines flow very smoothly as the poem is read. Well done.
CONGRATULATIONS Dr. Saroj K Padhi...This is great to see your lovely poem as the member poem of the day. Wrapped in gossamer beams love came as offering of silent breath of moist dreams and last night's perception soul caught as a memory. Long desired snow sparked with tender touch. Blissful moment was dropped with rain. This poem carries both love and emotion. A nice imagery is drawn. This is an outstanding poem....10
CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as the Member Poem Of The Day, Hurray for you Dr. Saroj K. Padhi, Cuttack and Odisha sounds so familiar and well known in my ears, from this area I know so many good and best poets, WOW! I am quiet for a moment, this poem breathes healthy AIR (though India has in most cities air pollusion) and LOVE. A Romantic Excellent poem from the Present Time. Most deserved, Dr. Saroj K Padhi.
Unmeasurable beauty in ever word, the imagery is vivid and lucid, you write with the greatest depth of a true romantic. Reading this over, there is a delicacy and sincerity that warms a cynic like me into the feeling that you capture. Love does exists with souls such as yourself. Congratulations for poem of the day a well deserved place.
Fantastic flight of imagery and it's stunning presentation has enhanced the beauty of love itself. Heartiest congrats on poem of the Day.
wow! ! enjoyed reading this masterpiece! ! congratulations for being selected as poet of the day! you deserve it! ! 10+++
Once again CONGRATULATIONS Dr. Saroj K Padhi. I agree with Sylvia poetess madam. This poem truly is mesmerizing.
Mesmerizing romantic poem about love, reading this time and again, does so many wonders. Love's sweetest tune, is echoing and vibrating here at the fullest. Most beautiful, most touching tender poem, the MPOTD most deserved, Dr. Saroj K. Padhi. God's Blessings for you, be in Abundance always. Amen.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Of the desire lurking in eyes of sun to merge/Into an engulfing emptiness under sky's bower...lovely poetic expression! A beautiful poem so well crafted and presented in a marvelous structure with fascinating 4 stanzas! Many congratulations for this wonderful poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!