Keep Silence Please Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Keep Silence Please

Rating: 5.0


They have become a silent story,
A story written on stones and bricks,
While each brick narrates a different story
As you touch them, run your hand,
They will come alive and speak to you
Of passion, betrayal, envy, compassion, deceit, and death.

Sometimes I feel they are built as ruins,
and all the grandeur was added to them later.
Only time has the power reveal once again,
The alluring perennial beauty.
Don't they resembles a woman
whose true essence lies underneath the layers
Creating smoke screen to cover her true self.
Whatever, silence has many stories to reveal
Keep silence please.

Friday, January 29, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: monument,philosophical,ruins
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suzon Albert 29 January 2021

How well you compared the life of past with present.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 30 January 2021

Story written on stones and bricks give us wonderful information and silently whispers to wisely and carefully listen to the history. If you touch the hands on bricks they will convey about betrayal, envy and war. However we need peace. We get it in silence.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 30 January 2021

The perennial beauty will be revealed with gradual sensation and perception in silence only. Natural perception gives us wonder of silence. Bricks are not built as ruins rather these are ruined by attack. Woman carries natural motherhood and she should be respected.

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Anjandev Roy 30 January 2021

Such a brilliant piece....

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me poet yeps poet 30 January 2021

oakaya moiya siolunced

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 January 2021

The stories of yesteryears create their history that affects the lives of humanity.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 January 2021

A poem of great depth. Very perceptive and well expressed.

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Susan Williams 31 January 2021

5 stars on this! ! ! favoriting it as well

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Susan Williams 31 January 2021

They have become a silent story, A story written on stones and bricks, ===a beautifully somber beginning to this poem

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me poet yeps poet 30 January 2021

trying to get a hang over here SILENTLY NEW PGMME OF PH CONFUSING NO

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