Desire is like a river, it flows on...
Desire is like a mountain, it stays on.....
Desire is like a rainbow... It flashes on…
Desire is like a flower... It blossoms on...
The heart has a desire to live on…..
The eye has a desire to meet with…
Love has a desire to spread on…..
Desire has a desire to burn on…..
A desire in you is driving you
And a desire in me is driving me…
Keep this desire ON….
Yes, this desire is the drive to living! If there is no desire, life will be so bland! But too much desire, as Buddha says is the root cause of all our suffering! A well thought out poem!
Th flow of your poem is so smooth, i know your secret...you kep the desire on..... beautiful write Asim Nehal. :)
The desire of the truth and the desire of love. Thanks for sharing.
This desire is what life is all about. We must not fail to keep it burning as you said here. Thank you for this Life-affirming, positive poem Asim.
Wow. That's such a lovely read. So simple, yet so powerful. It has a wonderful impact on the reader. Full marks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
There are times when a desire is unachievable, even harmful, and has to be suppressed.