Just Until Midnight Poem by Kaede Rirunaru

Just Until Midnight

Rating: 5.0


Beautiful Girl in the Ball, tell the Prince:

'When I wear my mask,
You keep your eyes on me,
When I use thick make up,
So you want to closer with me,

When I turn beautiful,
Then you known by my spell,
When I walk so ellegance,
So you going to tease me,

Oh baby, It's just can only one night,
Turn to a poor woman that only have a hope,
Than you'll know that's just a pretty lie,
Than better If you know the truth before...

it's too late, , You want somebody else, ,
I'm just a broken glass fall from above the chair, ,
You want me that way,
But no! It's Just Until MIDNIGHT!

So, walk away from me,
if you just won't to believe,
Don't love me now,
Cause you'll never...'

Then the Prince said:

'Even i see just an illusion,
but everything i see just an illusion,
Cause my eyes too bad to see a reality,

Even you're wear a mask,
Can you see everyone wear a mask too in this world,
Cause the truth is in you're heart,

Even it happened just one second,
I see the real you,
The real of you're heart,
Even if that's a lie
I must say thanks to the GOD,
Cause I see the most beautiful lie in my life,
Even if that is the end of my life,

I have no regret to tell but stoped it,
But no, last night I see the real princess,
Without mask,
Without make up,
and that wasn't an illusion,
It's REAL..
Same as my real love for her...'




Naru Kaede as the Beautiful Girl

Andre as the the Prince

Thanks for encourage me, I will not give up for being my self,
even the people love my mask, ,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Min Sia 02 December 2008

What a lovely piece! It's nice read your new poem! It's beautiful..I like the concept..The way it is written... Great!

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Fiona Davidson 02 December 2008

A very good read...thank you

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Sarwar Chowdhury 02 December 2008

Wow! beautiful! style of expression excellent! ..........10+

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Kite Remedy 02 December 2008

that's a kind of fairy tale of your own, my friends.. unique and genuine..

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 December 2008

Bagaimana kalau sesuatu yang berlaku itu adalah di luar dugaan kita.Begitu juga dengan cinta.Cinta itu buta, tapi selalunya kita yang membutakan cinta itu sendiri.Ayuh maju terus dong! !

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Aijaz Asif 04 December 2008

quite impressive write and you use the theme of dialogue in it with very strong imagineries.....i liked it thanks for sharing 10... rgds asif

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purple moon 04 December 2008

Yes, the trick is making it to 9am isn't it! if you make it to 10am then you will probably make it all the way back to midnight! well done. x.

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Joseph Poewhit 03 December 2008

Part of love game - trust and the masks

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What a beautiful philosophical fairy tale. It is a truly lovely poem.....Karin Anderson

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Ency Bearis 02 December 2008

a nice fantasy write...well done...beautiful...10 Ency Bearis

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Kaede Rirunaru

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Surabaya, Indonesia
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