Just One More Poem by kathleen hintz

Just One More



striving to get to the heavenly gates
when living in this so called hell
everytime i get a little closer
everything burns up in flames
nothing getting in my way except 4 old habbits
smoking my sorrow with a pace
trying to drink the bad memories away
but they only gone 4 a while then they always find away 2 stay
its like living in a prison and not being able 2 get out
then when u call 4 help no one hears u shout
just starring in that dark cloud
not seeing anything in that path
having no sight
but trying to see something that is not there
i have a chance where

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 26 December 2009

Just one more? :) pleeeez.

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3wwad 52 27 August 2009

it seems like you right ur poem from experience, thats what make it close to the reader. nice work.

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