Just Live Poem by Lyn Paul

Just Live

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Help is on its way
Where that help
May be coming from is unknown
But accept
It is time to accept it

Seeing trees of green
Is always enough
To keep you
Alive

Hearing the dawns birds singing
Is the start of a magical moment
Giving hope
To a day of natural highs
Strong enough to destroy the lows

Cherish what never seemed wrong
Forget what....
Will never be right
Live
Remind yourself
You are alive

Breathe because you can
Smile
You know You need too
Want
To keep achieving

When
All stands still
And all seems ruined
Hope
Will get you through it

So many before you
Have....
Many more after you
Will face challenges
At extreme levels

The will to live
To strive for life
Is all that is needed


Remind Yourself...
To just, remind yourself
Its only life
So just live it!




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10th November 2015
Lyn Paul

Tuesday, November 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: acceptance,believe,hope,live,strength
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tony Karas 10 November 2015

truly awesome write my friend. Remind yourself you are alive....

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Tony Karas 10 November 2015

truly awesome write my friend. Remind yourself you are alive.... a stunning line.

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Tony Karas 10 November 2015

A truly awesome write my friend. Remind yourself you are alive... LOVE that line!

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Kelly Kurt 10 November 2015

A moving poem, Lyn. Many now, before and after will encounter the same, so live and make the most of it. Thanks for the lift

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 September 2021

A brilliant poem.... short, sharp and highly expressive!

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Jennifer Birchall 05 June 2019

Hope is sometimes all we have but it can be enough to carry on. Another wonderful poem dear Lyn.

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Jennifer Birchall 05 June 2019

After reading this a some of your other poems, it inspired me to write a poem called The beach. Thank you dear Lyn.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 January 2016

To be alive and, to live in peace. Nice work.

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Amitava Sur 19 November 2015

The will to live To strive for life Is all that is needed ..... a lovely message is given in this wise poem to move ahead with courage

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Paul Brookes 18 November 2015

A great poem reminding us just live enjoyed

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