Just Let Me Be Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

Just Let Me Be

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'I am there with you
when you wake up

as the morning sunlight
falls into your door
and the slow humming
of vehicles is heard
from your window
I am there with you
for I see your sweetly smile
a lovely majestic eyes
and your long dark hair

my love will never fade
as long as you cling to me
it will never die
you will prolonged
the sadness of a man
if you release me now
for you are getting immortal
from the words flowing in my pen
for long after we are both gone
they will still be reading
the poems I made for you
do not break the twig
that is joining us
with the intense love I feel
don't let loose
and just let me be.'

Sunday, October 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 11 December 2016

'I am there with you when you wake up as the morning sunlight falls into your door - - - - - - - - - - - - - Love as the morning sunlight dispels darkness and fills the heart with pure bliss.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 30 October 2016

Thank you Mr Kumarmani Mahakul for your comment appreciate this a lot.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2016

Yes, love will never fade because this rises inside heart and soul. Morning sunlight which falls on door makes this shine more. Feeling love is interesting. Life rests on love to last for long.10

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