Just Call Me Darling Poem by aung si myanmar

Just Call Me Darling

Rating: 4.6


Would you like to visit to mausoleum?
Lots of beauties say, 'Warmly welcome.'
You will stick majestic ornaments
If eyes are allowed just to glance.

Would you like to feel music of love?
Romantic songs promise, 'Vibrate the heart.'
You will crack trace of melancholy
If ears are allowed just to be hungry.

Would you like to risk an airy maze?
Lust of fame motivates, 'Be brave! '
You will meet nucleus of meek fragrance
If nose is allowed just to take a breath.

Would you like to taste enchanting thrill?
Roar of heartbeat applauds, 'Wonderful female! '
You will be namby-pamby essence of bliss
If lips are allowed just to accept a kiss.

Would you like to create stunning poesy?
Even machismo murmurs, 'Sedate Peri! '
Nib will penetrate cells of cute skin.
All you need is just call me Darling.(Darling! ! !)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 31 October 2012

I agree with Eindaray, this poem is strange, but so powerful and meaningful we should focus to get the spiritual message of this work liked it my friend.

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Poetheart Morgan 31 October 2012

The power of words! ! ! Beautiful! ! !

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Hazel Durham 31 October 2012

Very deep and powerful poem with great lines! Inspired write!

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Villiamor Calventas 31 October 2012

poignant and speaks about love eternal

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So Close 31 October 2012

Great writing...some words are strange to me, but i really enjoyed it. You expressed the feel perfectly....keep writing dear »so close«

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 01 September 2015

Very entertaining posing a number of questions which makes the reader pause and think.

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Congrats for writing wonderfully!

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Babatunde Aremu 05 December 2012

Great write. There 'ifs' in all life trips. Every desire depends on something or the other. Well written

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Sanjay Mehta 04 December 2012

Existence in this world is because for every positive note there exists an negative one. Neither can be ignored. To be loved and accepted an strong balance has to be maintained with all the five senses, one should be clear as to his limitations, when to begin and when to stop. This you will accept is quite complex.

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Rishit Desai 30 November 2012

A brilliant piece. Truly amazing work.

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