Judged Poem by Crimson Love

Judged

Rating: 5.0


Beat the senses from my sensless mind,
My own hand holds the gavel,
I seal my own fate, with one swing,
My life has been judged,
By me and everyone else,
So painful are the judgements,
Whips upon my back give there words to the jury,
No one cares, There is no eveidence,
They see what they wish to see,
they know not the truth
yet the scars are evident.

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WONDERFUL! I like great poem lad, i like

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Lenore Lee 25 October 2011

So, so true. How the heart and mind are judged and punished by all without any evidence! It aches so bad when this happens yet it always does.

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Stefanie Fontker 25 October 2011

Interesting POV writing. I like this experimental writing of yours. Beautiful work.

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Romeo Della Valle 25 October 2011

Deep and touching! Your heart and mind is filtering through this amazing and powerful write! 10+++ Well deserved! Keep it up! Thank you for sharing this well crafted write! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from NYC....

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