It Went Poem by charles carrelli

It Went



I watched life and failed to live.
Standing silent, staring so violent.
It came from behind me, stood right beside me.
It went from beside me, to too far in front of me.
I hoped i could catch it, but i had already lost it.

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X X 28 January 2008

hmm, interestng concept, no too sure about 'to too'

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