It Was Just A Dream Poem by Mahfooz Ali

It Was Just A Dream

Rating: 5.0


Awake! Awake!
I heard the call,
So far away my memory crawled
Along the dark and lonely pit
To see what I could make of it.

The light came rustling in the room.
I realized it was almost noon;
I had been asleep so long,
it seemed........
As if my life had been redeemed.

I had closed my eyes for just a bit,
And I, but, thought I would dug a pit.
It was just a dream;
a nightmare sure
Where nothing really did occur.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Diwakar Bhatt 18 July 2011

entertaining........good write! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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i was entertained by this poem .and for that, thank you. :) nice one..10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 13 June 2009

'It was just a dream; a nightmare sure Where nothing really did occur.' Excellent poem. It is not mere a dream, awake, awake is the core message of the poem. Nice positive poem in favor of mankind.10+++

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Mahfooz Ali

Mahfooz Ali

Lucknow (U.P.) India
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