It Rains Poem by konye ori

It Rains

Rating: 5.0


In the sky, the clouds gathered,
and earth exhaled.
And like a tree in the autumn winds my heart swayed.
I trembled at the darkness that fell
when you walked out of my life
Deafening claps of thunder echoed across the sky
with every step you took.
My vision of you- hampered by flare of flashing lightening
The rains descended on me; soaking my spirit, soul and body;
Am washed away-
Am flooded in my loss-
I shudder in the cold
Every day, with you away:

It rains.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
linzi- kidd 06 March 2008

...i dont know what to say... this is a spectacular poem...

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Carolyn Sears 12 January 2008

Hello Konye ori, This is an excellent write, you truly have the talented to carry you far.. I love the rain so poetry, writes on rain it always catches my eye.. God Bless! ! !

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Andrew Blakemore 09 January 2008

Excellent work Konye, you are a very talented poet.10!

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Craig Steiger 31 December 2007

very poignant, a poem that goes somewhere deep in the soul CS

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