It Is Like The Rain Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

It Is Like The Rain

Rating: 5.0


it is like the rain
which send down from the sky
wealth are adornment of the life
children are souvenir of the love
love and faith last forever
like rainbow in respect of the hope

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 15 August 2009

Every word has a good meaning. I like positive poems!

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Fay Slimm 15 August 2009

Beautifully worded Ahmad - - this befits the tribute meant.....10 from Fay

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Christina Phan 28 August 2009

wow i enjoy it very much very beautiful kept up tht fanastic job 10+

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Louis Rams 16 August 2009

you have used my three key words. LIFE, LOVE, FAITH A DOUBLE TEN

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It was lovely to see the rainbow at the end of your poem Ahmad. I have heard 'to see the rainbow sometimes we need to see the rain'! You have written a beautiful tribute including love, faith, and hope and 'children are a souvenir of love' really touched my heart. Top marks Karin Anderson

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Rajaram Ramachandran 15 August 2009

'Children are souvenir of the love, ' how true it is what you say.

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Omar Ibrahim 15 August 2009

you are right.....wonderful one deserves a 10

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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