It Is Coming Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
It Is Coming
As the birth of soul brings joy
The death can be made to enjoy
When desires are met
And cool welcome awaits the fate
Yes death can be negotiated
"Control your breathe" when mediated
More you stop breathing in systematic manner
The death can be pushed further
It is not days that are destined
But the number of intake is defined
Less you breathe
More you can avoid death
The death can be controlled
The life can be ceased or rolled
The mind can be absolved of mystery
It may have blessings of an almighty
Just believe in principle
Life and death is natural cycle
Whether you die helplessly
Or die with honor and cheerfully
It is destined hour
Not a second late or earlier
If you feel it is coming
Get prepared for welcoming
Summary Liam Clancy9 hours ago I really like this Poem. I would try to simplify it a little bit though. I think you have a great message, but there seem to be a few unnecessary lines in there that detract from the overall poem. (I'm being critical cause I really do enjoy this poem and want it to get better. Im not critical of really bad poems cause there is no use.)
welcome hitesh bhagat n mericel remirez 3 secs · Unlike · 1
Gail Desautels Western world is so busy preparing, and trying to *stave it off* that they never live, and do not know how to. Idiots... 1 hr · Unlike · 1
welcome Devender Kaur, Rohani Daud 3 secs · Unlike · 1
cute Straight Crayy9 hours ago Really good Comment +1
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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As the birth of soul brings joy The death can be made to enjoy