It Could Be Within Us Poem by Md. Asadullah

It Could Be Within Us

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Happily she walked towards home.
Bubbling and rippling like river foam.
A man passed by dressed well.
Entered her nostrils fishy smell.

She looked at the man and walked.
Away from him she quickly stalked.
As she walked a soldier crossed her.
Neatly dressed, wearing cap of fur.

She smelt bad odor of mulch rotten.
She gazed at him with face sullen.
As she came very near to her house.
A woman stood in saree and blouse.

Bad odor of scum and rancid butter.
As if the woman came from gutter.
She entered and disgust could be seen.
Thinking why don't they stay clean.

Her son came running with a smile.
Holding his nose stopped awhile.
Said ' mom why don't you bathe,
Your sweat is smelly, you're sunbathed'.

Sunday, April 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: wisdom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 20 April 2014

Na thi hal ki jab hamen apne khabar, rahe dekhte auron ke aib-o-hunar.....Pari apni buraiyon pe jo nazar to niga mein koi bura na raha. Mujhse bura na koey. What a poem!

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Gajanan Mishra 06 April 2014

running with a smile, I like it.

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