Is This Love Poem by lindsay rose

Is This Love

Rating: 5.0


i love you you yell
as you look in my eyes
for the frist time i believed you
is there really no more lies

after every time you hurt me
things were starting to feel real
you didnt lie at all
you just told me how you feel

you did your best to show me
and really make me see
that it didnt matter where we were
as long as your with me

little did we know
befor our love could start
id have to leave again
and well slowley drif apart

you love is what i needed
and ill miss you every day
i think about you all the time
theres just so much left to say

i miss you more then ever
i can feel it in my soul
i used to have a heart
but not im left with just a hole

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chandrashekar A Posy Poet 08 August 2009

what an intense love...............truly! ! !

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Jen Capaldi 20 September 2009

nicely penned. to the point with your emotions. love and pain hand in hand. keep writing! ! Jen

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Noel Horlanda 20 September 2009

it's language of sadness, regrets but romantic in any way. Well penned, Lindsay.

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MKG F 14 August 2009

hey! nice write... ;)

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very powerful Linds :)

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Black & White Right 08 August 2009

sincere. simplistic and pure..

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