Goodbye Poem by lindsay rose

Goodbye

Rating: 5.0


i never thought i'd love you
or have to say goodbye
i new there was no forever
because you always made me cry

you held me in your arms
told me your feelings were true
as i looked in to your eyes
i new just what you'd do

you told me that you loved me
and would always feel this way
told me you would never leave me
then i watched you walk away

now you say you miss me
and that we can make it work
but all i can think about
is every time you were a jerk

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Timothy Hector 14 July 2009

i feel the emotion in every word. beautiful yet sad.

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Jasmine Dugas 15 July 2009

amazing and beautiful poem

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Scott Austin 16 July 2009

The reader can sense your passion within your heart. Thank you for sharing. Scott

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Jen Capaldi 20 September 2009

ohhh. my dear i know just how you feel. very nice write. true in feelings and thought. nice work. Jen

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M.j. Daniels 30 July 2009

That was pretty good untill the end. that was HILARIOUS! !

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Omar Ibrahim 30 July 2009

the last word made me laugh................good poem keep the good work up

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Noel Horlanda 16 July 2009

a very common way of a male deceiving a female. He promises the stars, the moon and even the planets and the sun just to make the poor female to fall for him. After he gets what he wants, the smart guy is nowhere to be seen, he disappeared like a popping bubble in the air. Do you agree? Good work, keep writing. Thanks.

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Siddharth Singh 16 July 2009

Resentment revealed very nicely. Good work.

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