Is There Another Word? Poem by Ray Hansell

Is There Another Word?

Rating: 4.5


Is there another word?
That can replace goodbye
If there is
I'd like to give it a try

Goodbye seems so final
To much like an ending
I've always believed
That's the message that word is sending

There has to be another word
To be used in it's place
Because when you tell someone goodbye
You can usually see the sadness on their face


10-5-20/RjH

Wednesday, October 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: goodbye
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 October 2020

Goodbye seems to be final and ending but it is the starting point of emotion and memory. A perceptive mind feels this sequence better. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned...5 stars..

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George Krokos 07 October 2020

How about " farewell" . BTW the first word on the second line of the second verse should be spelt as " Too" . Regards and greetings - George K.

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