A Cheater Caught Poem by Ray Hansell

A Cheater Caught

Rating: 4.5


You took off with him
Seeking something new
Little did you know
The things that he would do to you

While he was cheating
On his girlfreind with you
He was cheating on you
With someone that you knew

While his girlfriend sat at home
He ran around with you
When you weren't with him
He was off with the woman you knew

But one day his adventures
Were all found out about
He hurt you so very much
That you wanted to scream and shout

So while you thought you were the one
You found out you were not
Your stomach turned, it made you sick
Some will say, you deserved what you got

A man who cheats on his girlfriend
Then cheats on the one he's cheating with
I guess to him it didn't matter
I guess it was all worth the risk


11-26-09/RJH

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 29 November 2018

Ray, such a well penned poem of the day. Congrats for being chosen.......10++++++++++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 November 2018

So beware of CHEATING after one time belief! //// nice poem

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Unnikrishnan E S 29 November 2018

Hi Ray, First, congratulations on being selected Poet of the Day. This marvellous poem deserved the recognition. Good. The simple maxim for life is, “Do Only what is right in your own consciousness! ” If you hurt others, you are definitely going to get hurt, if not today, tomorrow! If you cheat another, and cheated in the same act, who are you complaining against?

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2018

Beautiful poem with touching expression. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Carl Roussell 29 November 2018

Some people just seem to like the thrill of the chase and the novelty with little regard to the feelings of those around them. A very accurate poem and a 10

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AB Faniki 15 September 2019

Thanks for sharing.

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Julia Luber 21 June 2019

Typical behavior pattern of somebody two timing, is probably three timing, four timing, and how they trick each into feeling 'special.'- - maybe it's just a 'trick' that creates, and has nothing to do with the cheater at all.

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Bryony Sheldon 19 January 2019

Been the victim of a cheater. Thank you for sharing; this is touching, wonderful and relateable!

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Lyn Paul 29 November 2018

Heartfelt words. A situation that I have never experienced and could not even imagine the pain and the distrust. Thank you

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Bill Cantrell 29 November 2018

A cheaters eyes loses their color and their kiss will never find its way to a lasting happy place, congrats for poem of the day!

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