Independence Poem by karthik kannan

Independence

Rating: 4.5


The day when tyranny fell
A baby got delivered well,
The Big Brother heard the tolling
Death knell; one goes up up up
One goes down down down;
White hands go down,
Brown hands move up;
Every snake has a ladder,
Every ladder has a snake;

A war was won in silence,
A war began in silence;
Khaki hands goes right,
Green hands goes left;
Khaki and green forms blood
Flows through the Jhelum's bed
And flows through Jhelum's bed.......

Independence
Wednesday, September 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: colonialism,independence,indian,pakistan
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 08 September 2015

I like the articulation of the piece and the rhyme scheme. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Karthik.

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David Wood 03 September 2015

You have summed up independence very well. A good first poem.

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Karthik Kannan 03 September 2015

thankyou :)

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 03 September 2015

Very interesting and so factual. I relate to this poem well. How many years of study of Indian history! I wish they would put poems like this inbetween texts. this is so original. Loved reading it.

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Karthik Kannan 03 September 2015

Thanks! :)

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Kelly Kurt 02 September 2015

A powerful poem, Karthik. Peace

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