Inaudible Cry Poem by Shayne De Vera

Inaudible Cry

Rating: 4.0


The sky is limitless and blue
The sea is large but we don't have a clue
The voice of the memories whispering in your ears
Too sad to see and too painful to hear

The moonlight illuminates my heart
The dance of the burning flowers is going to depart
To the stars that played with the darkness
This wall we are in is boundless

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naida Nepascua Supnet 12 February 2010

nice work jame your words are as mysterious as you are

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I'm me 02 February 2010

I like it! somewhat mysterious (second stanza) , like the title would suggest, but still easily understood. I was expecting something more... paradoxical, given the title, which is an oxymoron :) Keep writing! -Cheng Zheng

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