In Your Eyes Poem by Laurie hill

In Your Eyes

Rating: 5.0


In your eyes where shadows stray,
by heartbreak they were cast
you look at me through lowered lash,
through shadows of your past,
And when i gently take your hands,
our fingers soft entwine,
I'll kiss you softly on your cheek
and whisper, girl be mine
I place my fingers on your chin
and gently lift your face,
your dark eyes looking into blue,
you search and find a grace,
I hold your gaze and smile at you,
you smile a soft reply,
I kiss the starlight tears away,
that stumble from your eyes
So warm, your body moulds to me,
you rest your cheek to mine
You whisper words so tenderly,
your words my heart define
I feel the softening of your soul,
as you hold me tighter still
I feel my heartbeat step with yours,
and know it always will.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 16 July 2009

Beautiful Laurie, what more can I say? 10 Lynda xx

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Sonya Florentino 16 July 2009

I am speechless Laurie... truly, what can I say, what can Lynda say...what can anybody say...? ! ? ! ? ! ?

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 16 July 2009

Hello Laurie and just a word to let you know I enjoyed this passionate poem. Good work. Loyd

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Fiona Davidson 16 July 2009

Lovely sensual write Laurie...10+++

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Duh Huh 17 July 2009

I can say WOW. Laurie, once again, you have reached many a ladys heart with your touching poem. I have always said you have a way with our hearts and this is further proof :) Thank you for sharing your talent with us my friend :)

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Susan Bagley 26 August 2009

And every woman who reads this will wish it was She this poem had been written for. Ah, Laurie, you have a way of making us women with poet hearts fall in love with your words and you. Lovely, just lovely.

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Smiley Hooker 22 August 2009

What a heartwarming piece...a pleasure to read...the words flowing so gently and wonderfully. i love it, my friend! thanks! :)

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Shashendra Amalshan 29 July 2009

This is so lovely indeed sir! ! ! ! ! ! I loved this one... very passionate and beautiful indeed.... these days i m sort of restricted to reading these sorts of stuff. helps to relax my mind.. lovely.... with lots of love shan

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T S 18 July 2009

Such beautiful words, absolutley beautiful. 10 /10 again

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Another Wow! Laurie. Where is all this beautiful poetry coming from? Where ever it is, please keep it up, as it is simply divine! 10 Karin Anderson

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