////In Your Eyes Poem by akram saqib

////In Your Eyes

Rating: 4.1


n your eyes

Fears arise



I do gaze

But in the haze



Of pelf and power

Of wealthy hours



I draw blank

In my plank



Loneliness resides

And hate abides



Hate for me

That is the



Fruit of love

And over above



A pain arise

Due to eyes



You did flirt

With my heart



And I believed

And I received



Dark days ahead

The night’s dread



When I see

In your eyes

Fears arise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 02 June 2009

hey...interesting presentation!

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Aijaz Asif 02 June 2009

Loneliness resides And hate abides....bravo, bravo thats a very beautiful peice with so much depth and lurking loneliness, thanks for sharing 10+++ rgds asif

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Ashraful Musaddeq 05 June 2009

Flirt with heart...in eyes fears arise, touching Nice rhyming,10+++

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Catrina Heart 07 June 2009

Quite catchy and interesting end lines......lovely rhymes 10

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Lady Grace 12 June 2010

in your eyes, i saw answers....

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Shams Tahir 22 June 2009

love expresses and eyes are the first contact great work sir

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Rafique Farooqi 15 June 2009

it is beautiful vision dear Akram......i like it.

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Fade Ward 12 June 2009

simple deep beautiful interesting all so very true good write post back

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Noha El3wdy 08 June 2009

interesting, simple and deep

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