I could never escape from you
You know my every move
And when I fall...you are there
Even when I am unaware
or hide from the truth
You're the ultimate sleuth
Even when I think you're not there
As if you do not care
You're there...
...in the whispers
So listen to the whispers
Your heart will tell you so
You will know
And you will understand
That God is in command
He gave you all you need
too succeed
So just listen to the whispers
I think some people have a certain ESP about us. They can feel what we are thinking or doing secretely.
It is the softest sound (like whispers) that make the loudest impact. In fact, this poem is like the soft whisper of your heart, giving a loud message. I like it.
JoAnn, this is a wonderful poem filled with heartfelt sentiment. Indeed we should all listen to the whispers. The whispers in our hearts. Beautifully said. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David
nicely done, in the whispers holds the sentiment that he is there, and if we chose to listen we will hear that still small voice, well done....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
again, so true! and really uplifting. So far I'm loving your poems.