In The Stillness Poem by Rebecca Navarre

In The Stillness

Rating: 5.0


I'd like to take some time with you.Take
some walks and talk too. Share our images,
and our views. Count the stars and feel life
move. Hand in hand, a stillness new. Underneath
the moon so blue.

Sunday, March 3, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: family,god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 12 February 2022

Take some walks and talk too.....poetry at its best in its low key. A very cute poem...5 stars.

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 February 2022

" Hand in hand, a stillness new./ Underneath the moon so blue." I could not hide the smile, and my wife is after me to explain what is so endearing in the poem. What can I tell her, but smile again! ,

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Susan Williams 03 March 2019

You weave such beautiful imagery, my dear friend! They draw your reader into your beautiful world of love and understanding. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 09 March 2019

Dear Susan, Thank you! .. May God bless you! .. And may his angels always surround you, and your family as well! .. Dear friend! .. We are hoping and praying all will be well here! .. Thank you for being so kind! ..

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Susan Williams 08 March 2019

Rebecca- -May God bless you and keep you and praying all is well cuz your fans love your bouncing happy replies! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 05 March 2019

:) Dear Susan, Thank you! .., For such beautifully thoughtful and kind reply! .. I've been a little quieter now in replies, but, Ever so grateful! .. Dear friend :) Hope all is well! .. God bless! ..

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