In The Skies.(A Haiku) Poem by Rebecca Navarre

In The Skies.(A Haiku)

Rating: 4.4


Lightning bugs, pass by.
In the night, under moon bright.
Love the way, you fly.

Sunday, July 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: awe,beauty,nature,wonder
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 30 July 2017

This is so sweet! Another great job on the recently mastered haiku form (I think she's got it, folks!) This one gets a 10- - hope it shows up in your stats soon!

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Rebecca Navarre 01 August 2017

Thank You! ! ! Practicing Poetess, For Your Very Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Brings Smiles To Hearts! ! ! ! ! And Beautifully Touches Souls! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 February 2022

Love the way, you fly.....a simple, sweet, soft and light little poem.

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 February 2022

Beautiful. In so few words, you have captured the entire beauty of night….

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 August 2017

under the moon light, you fly............ so nice a poem, simple in its content but conveys a lot. thankyou dear poet. tony

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Rebecca Navarre 07 August 2017

Thank You! ! ! Dr. Tony, You Are Very Kind! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Beautifully Inspiring To Hearts And Minds! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 August 2017

In the night! ! With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rebecca Navarre 07 August 2017

Thank You! ! ! Edward, For Such A Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! You A Very Amazing And Wonderful Poet! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Susan Williams 04 August 2017

I have to believe that you and Haiku are made for each other! ! ! This captures your love of nature both heavenly and the creatures below.. You are very diligent to pick out the words that paint a picture and a tone and follow the Haiku structure at the same time. This poem is so delicately radiantly lovely. Nailed the form- imparted essence of night flight. 10++++++++++++++++++ and a spot on my Favs

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Rebecca Navarre 05 August 2017

Thank You! ! ! For Such A Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Has A Way That, Captures The Heart So...Like Beautifully Deep Skies, So Gold! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! ! Had Added Yours To In My Favs Too! ! ! ! ! :)

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