Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 4,127 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

In The Heart Of An Angel - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

In the heart
of an angel
lies the truth

In the heart
of the few
lies the devil
and damnation

Comments about In The Heart Of An Angel by Dave Alan Walker

  • Rookie - 120 Points Persian Khushi (8/6/2013 3:16:00 AM)

    Absolutely true... thought provoking... free will... good or evil.. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 22 Points Lasoaphia Quxazs (8/4/2013 10:27:00 AM)

    I see there is no good, there is no evil, only life experiences. Many is teaching us that never do it again, which is good. Many times the good can turn into bad and the bad turn into very good, like we are lucky if we did not get something, later we find it out. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Sesan Falade (8/3/2013 1:39:00 PM)

    sooooooooooooooooooooo true (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 397 Points Poetheart Morgan (8/2/2013 5:27:00 PM)

    Lets they rest in their own hell! While the few bathed on the sunlight! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kalpana Shah (8/1/2013 7:29:00 AM)

    short and sweet... do visit ur imagination on my site as my name describes - kalpana (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,015 Points Yasmeen Khan (7/27/2013 10:08:00 PM)

    We have two chambers one for devil, other for angel. Which one overpowers it depends on our will. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,300 Points Anil Kumar Panda (7/27/2013 10:49:00 AM)

    yeah that's true.nicely done.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (7/25/2013 7:03:00 AM)

    agree with Payal,
    short, simple, but precise hit to the heart
    really love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 479 Points Yewande Adedokun (7/24/2013 10:24:00 AM)

    precision dominates. good job friend (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,740 Points Patricia Grantham (7/22/2013 7:17:00 PM)

    I love the lines that said in the heart of a few lies the Devil.
    Good always overcome evil just as the light casts out the dark.
    Loved this one Dave. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,497 Points Unwritten Soul (7/19/2013 5:26:00 AM)

    And In the heart
    of human
    there are two chambers
    Angel side or Evil hide
    Which one we gonna to use? _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,816 Points Ramesh Rai (7/18/2013 9:27:00 PM)

    beautiful lines
    In the heart
    of an angel
    lies the truth
    In the heart
    of the few
    lies the devil
    and damnation
    10+++++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/18/2013 12:38:00 PM)

    Short and sweet. Very well written.Good write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 128 Points Teddy Opundo (7/17/2013 10:47:00 AM)

    Short and perfect.Openly understood (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,717 Points Valerie Dohren (7/15/2013 3:55:00 PM)

    Me being the eternal pessimist, I would say in the heart of the many lies the devil.... Especially like the first stanza. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,739 Points David Wood (7/15/2013 5:12:00 AM)

    Short and sweet Dave and a good message. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (7/14/2013 11:21:00 AM)

    brilliant sir with few words you have told us so much...... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 828 Points Juan Olivarez (7/14/2013 9:38:00 AM)

    Wow. Short and to the point. Great piece Dave. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,686 Points Hazel Durham (7/13/2013 2:13:00 PM)

    The truth will set you free!
    The devil and damnation makes people prisoners!
    Great write! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (7/13/2013 3:39:00 AM)

    There is a little of the devil in all of us;
    ''all have sinned '', but a cup of grace
    can restore all within. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 13, 2013

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