In Success Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

In Success

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Life shall appear
In front
Or in rear
With same roar

It shall never end
And continue with trend
To pose challenges
For mankind to manage

Life may go on
With new form to be known
It shall depend
How you take on respond

Pain and agony shall always be part
Feel no ore about them and start
It shall be routine matter
For not to think or utter

Generation after generation may be over
But not the world with its cover
It shall pose many problems
For us to accept turn in success

Tuesday, October 21, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 October 2014

Life shall appear In front

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Heather Wilkins 21 October 2014

generation after generation may be cover but not the world with its cover good thoughts

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2014

amazing Ibrahim Khalaff9 hours ago amazing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2014

good read Joe Kirk9 hours ago sensible, realaistic. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2014

Good! Patrick Waters9 hours ago 4th stanza confused me with ore, . But I like, It shall pose many problems, Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2014

Good Write Elizabeth Mason9 hours ago Good Write

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2014

ligew mackata Yes that's true this world full of surprise Anytime in any day will cause cahoots We do not know We can't predict 54 mins · Unlike · 1 11 hours ago by hasmukh amathalal | Reply

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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