In And Out The Lusty Nil Wedding Bells Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury

In And Out The Lusty Nil Wedding Bells

Rating: 4.8


(Inspired by marvin goldfarb's gr8 contest in which I won a trophy cup and wonderful poems by other poets as noted below, 'LESSON IN LIFE' by BrittBrattTechy, 'Every child deserves better' by Poetryintheblood, and..'TODAY'S SOCIETY' By Gary. W. Hill.)

My poem below then read the poems I copy pasted in my author notes.
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Instead of in and out the dusty bluebells my title:
In and out the lusty no weddin bells'

If you are ruthlessly one of those
who changes lovers like you do your clothes
and if you do beget each time
think of the hapless kids you leave behind
rather than the silly selfish fun you have each time
for you deprive them of either yourself
or your ex- other half.
Gosh, it took two to make a child
so it takes two to make it glow and grow
For nurturing them, both of you as couple need show
A single mother is modernity's most pitiable unfortunate sight
Modernisation to be blamed for this miserable plight.
How many times will you jilt and ditch partners
just for moments of nihilistic pleasure and excitement?
But why let your innocent tiny tots suffer
as if children were mere byproducts!
And byproducts of what?
I say, of flitting, fleeting lusts and desirous passions,
when senses can't think of consequence or contraceptions
for damn it you can't know where and when you will be carried away...
Then the resulting lil angels
to be cast aside as some leftovers
from past whirlwind romances.!

All that merry-go-round of flirtation
Marriage replaced by cohabitation
Falling in and out of the cycle-like-love
again and again for a newfound turtledove!
No probability of any stability
esp with the scenario of promiscuity
while kids suffer from disability.
Didn't the Creator expect all couples
to stay together till 'death do 'em' apart
So how dare any of His creations
stick together merely till 'they get tired and bored? ? ? ?
As if the heart were an everchanging love mart!

(pls do read the copy pasted poems by others below to get a gist of what im reiterating above)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
THERE IS NO SPACE TO COMMENT UNDER MY POEM? Author's notes: Out of wedlock By Evelyn. M      Epidemic Of-pain   life •  You'll see her walking down the street ------Makeup covering her face Her kids have nothing to eat -----Oh she's such a disgrace!    A new kid ever year------ The youngest is yet to talk -----They don't have clothes to wear They are all born out of wedlock.  _____ Why does she keep repeating the very same mistakes? -------Why allow her children to suffer? Why does she have to go through so many heartbreaks? Can't she see that life is getting tougher?    The kids don't even know their fathers Is this the life she wanted to live? Why did she even fall for those creatures? Probably this was her motive.   Carriage before marriage is wrong, you see.. They will use you, impregnate you, and leave you be... They will act all innocent in front of your eyes They will whisper all sweet things to you from thousand miles ____You'll be too blind to see that you're captured in lies From thousand miles now, they won't hear your cries   You'll have no one to talk to, the baby screaming all night long You won't know what to do, their screams will be your favourite song   He got what he wanted, and now he's gone Stop repeating the very same mistakes, and start moving on!   ______ Lesson In Life   ____These days morals have gotten lost Teens wanna get in bed at any cost Future dreams, that college degree ___Put on hold you are a mother to be You thought he loved you, guess not He found out now you're not so hot It's the next girl's turn to find it out The relationship was not about love Pregnancies are what's kept track of How many babies he brought to life Should've waited till you were a wife Now you must deal with it all alone His where abouts are now unknown You can't party and no hanging out This baby is here, it's all life's about A lesson you learned the hard way Time for you to grow up right away This baby no accident not a mistake  Just remember those steps to take ___No ring on a finger don't get in bed That is today's lesson enough said   ©  Brittany McCarthy      Today's Society _____  First too young to be married Then simply hadn't the time As she continued to churn out kids Like some weird production line   She doesn't see the point in marriage It's an institution out of date Quite happy with the way things are Though the situation is far from great   Though she far from lives in poverty She seems to get by OK You see, she gets more money from the state Each time another kid is on the way   She says she's " too busy for marriage" And with the way things stand, " she's fine" 5 years,5 kids,5 different dads No wonder she hasn't the time   She actually seems quite oblivious To the disapproving stares It's the kids that I feel sorry for I real sad state of affairs   The way she chooses to live her life Simply baffles me    She symbolizes everything that is wrong With today's society.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 20 September 2022

Cheaters are just deceivers looking for a quickie. People going through lovers like going through clothes, changing any time they want. Great work S!

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Bri Edwards 10 September 2022

favorite line: 'As if the heart were an everchanging love mart! ' : ) bri but, REALLY, for the single moms and kids I give a.... : (

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Bri Edwards 10 September 2022

's', I read your poem and a few lines of first poem in poet's notes. I give 4 stars to your poem, for your thoughts and some rhyming. CONTRACEPTION is wonderful if available and used.

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Unwritten Soul 26 August 2022

It is right, i guess the one who change partners like that has trust, insecurity issue. Probably not now but eventually will feel how life without being someone who love and care them. Desire will go but heart cant be left empty.

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Richard Wlodarski 23 August 2022

Poetess Kamoonpury, this is an excellent poem about promiscuity. Some incredibly beautiful lines. You've so brilliantly captured the essence of unfaithfulness. I truly enjoyed reading this work of art. Thank you very much for bringing it to mine attention.

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