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(July 22 1993 / Sanfrancisco, California)

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Immortal Moment

I can hear the whispered words
Of those who lie forgotten
But the message rings on still
Watching a world of white
Dissipate slowly
And where the darkness lies
We all lie too
Where our light houses shine at us
But they're too far away
And in this moment lies eternity
Somewhere forever
Kept locked with in our treasure chests
Where our eyes meet each others
And look away to the moon
This is our immortal moment
Our forever
But even that doesn't last long enough
And all too fast the world settles down
And time starts again
But our immortal moment with remain

Submitted: Thursday, July 18, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 19, 2013


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  • Khairul Ahsan (7/30/2013 1:38:00 AM)

    This poem deserves 10/10

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  • Khairul Ahsan (7/23/2013 1:53:00 AM)

    Where our light houses shine at us
    But they're too far away
    And in this moment lies eternity
    Somewhere forever
    Nice, poetic vision of eternity.

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