Images Poem by Sandra Martyres

Images

Rating: 5.0


At the break of dawn each day
when I awake
my eyes invariably stray
to that niche in the wall
where a portrait used to hang
a hook
rusty with the ravages of time
still there
and while I stare
the wall
is suddenly no longer bare
the image of a face appears
with those piercing eyes
as always so endearing
and that proud smile
of a young ambitious man.

Gradually the image changes
a receding hairline
graying whiskers
a wiser look
a kinder smile
yet in those eyes
something seems amiss
I see a sadness that never used to be.
And as the image slowly fades
as always
and the memories of a lost decade
invariably remain
I wonder why.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

that was a very true observation sandra...when you get to see your old photo albums..it really feels like you are seeing someboby else..nice poem

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Fiona Davidson 27 March 2009

This is a truly beautiful write Sandra...memories and photgraphs....10+++

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Sathyanarayana M V S 31 March 2009

Beautiful, touching poem. As I said in wonderful English. Exceptional poet u are! ! !

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Kesav Easwaran 31 March 2009

moving write...good diction...good work...10

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 04 April 2009

gorgeous! one of the best impressionistic poems in PH. it remind me of Mallarme's poems!

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Indira Babbellapati 11 April 2009

the image is constant...but our perspectives keep changing, don't they?

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Lynda Robson 06 April 2009

A moving write Sandra, deep and expressive,10 Lynda xx

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Such a haunting piece Sandra and it make me think about the supernatural. Your emotions are very heartfelt and it brought my emotions to the fore too. I liked the couplet rhyme you used in the 3rd last line and the last line.

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Yelena M. 05 April 2009

So deeply emotional and expressive, made me ponder and imagine..thanks for this delicate one..10+++ A.

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Miriam Maia Padua 05 April 2009

wow...wonderful work... I was carried and tempted to ponder and wants to imagine images on the wall too...smile Very touching thoughts...brilliant ideas you shared with us here.. i, simply love this....10+++++

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