If Only You Understood Poem by bludring 222

If Only You Understood

Rating: 4.0


I sit here tryin to tell myself that
You're the one,
That you're the one for me,
And then I realize, I don't know you

I only want you to finally understand
What I'm tryin to say to you,
Every time I try, the words come out wrong
You just don't understand what I want to tell you

If I asked you to the movies,
What would you say to me?
Would you say yes,
Or would you ignore me to stay popular?

What can I do for you,
How can I say that you're the one,
The one for me that I don't even know?
Even you must want something......

Can I just ask you to be mine,
Mine through this message in a bottle?
Would you say yes or no?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 May 2008

not bad for a new piece. i guess you gonna move on once u have the touch.keep writing, reading and don't give up.

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