Idols Poem by allan macli borges
Idols
The day has come to his rising
Echoes of the hammer recovering
Ripping the all ages icons up
No chance for them getting over
Old men talking slowly
Heads down, quills on their hands
She said they are crazies
Just kids fighting for a bit of candy
What means their words about us all?
Why have we lost our oldest friends?
But the hammer is getting high and higher
Sir, I am unable to understand the real inner idea. Can u please explain! ! ! ? ? ?
..............liked ur write but felt i didnt understand the thought u are trying to present....! ! ! ! !
we may not last old friends...... why are we lossing......the idols really give some picture of inner feelings......
I like it, I can feel the feeling from it. Thank you for telling me about it 10++++
Well, I read this three times. After three readings, I still couldn't figure out what any part of it meant. This may be the most obscure piece that I have read on Poemhunter. Therefore, I have no comment. GW62
Title of the poem is clear but the contents are very symbolic, meaningful though. The time has come for old idols and thoughts to be hammered and broken. A short and good poem, Allan.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/2/2024 3:46:48 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I liked it, just seems like yo second guess yourself a little and shorten it up. It was good though.