Identity Poem by Deepti Agarwal

In our quest to achieve material goals, sometimes we loose focus on family and spiritual values. In the process people change and we hardly recognise the person in the mirror staring at us. Like your lively, unique style and concepts in your writings......Gr8..............10+++

Look into the mirror You can see your identity Yes, it’s physical. Then why can’t we See the mirror inner To identify the ‘self’? Doesn’t the inner mirror Has mercury in it? Yes it has… but we humans Always would like to see outer Just because, our eyes tend to see. Dear poet, you have wonderfully penned this concept of identity. Provoked me to feel its depth. Thank you.

We are lost in materialism, selfish motives… so feel a sense of loss. We all need conscious mirrors to guide our path, and develop the imminent faith in creation, Very thoughtful lines… Abha

Here in this world no one is nobody’s pal. The relations hold as long as sentiments last. That is all! Deepti’s poem doesn't get lost in PH poem crowd. A ‘poem face’ worth to remember!

in crowd of this unique creation we are just droplets in time and space some one we meet someone goes bye leaving us as our swings move through eternal spring offcourse identity gets exalted always while swaying in its own tone..............unique imagery of of life while raving up in the niche of our time yet with ingenuity when lucid, well penned,1o+, thanks for sharing