Idea Of You Poem by Jennifer Unknown

Idea Of You

Rating: 5.0


To close my eyes and see your smile
Hear your footsteps walking to me
The burning sweaty palms of your hands on me
Your identifying smell lingering about
Kisses hard enough to make me shiver
Your strong chest firmly against mine
Just the idea of you
Leaves me hungry in anticipation
Feed me your love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahfooz Ali 04 September 2007

This is true......nice piece of work...this all what I want to with my beloved.....hehehehehehe......do keep writing.....buck up.....wonderful work.

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Max Reif 02 September 2007

I think this is a pretty immediate piece. You don't use the cliches of anticipating a lover, but express your own, honest anticipation. There are a few surprises. And your last line, well, that's wonderful!

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Ghost Writer 30 August 2007

lovely poem. short and concise, but tells all your longings

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Lillian J. 30 August 2007

Very impassioned write! Nicely done! Lilly :)

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