I wish I wish upon our kiss, that many more will fall upon my lips.
I wish I wish when you gaze into my eyes, that I get lost in yours.
I wish I wish that we hold onto each other until our life expires.
I wish I wish, that your love was as real as mine.
I wish I wish, that wishes could come true.
Now smile upon me, as you watch me die inside.
Superb write Gary so heartfelt and with great rhythm and flow!
realy fantastic piece of writing.. love this..! ! pleez do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my poems & please also check my site too.. poemtheart :) thank you..
An emotional and insightful depiction has been made on love so touchingly and incisively. Beautiful poem shared amazingly.10
Passionate rendition, well articulated and elegantly brought forth from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Very heartfelt poem with strong emotions. An insightful depiction of the whimsical and temperamental nature of love. Thanks for sharing Gary.
I did not see how this poem was any different than the many cliche stories of love already floating out there. I am glad that so many people seemed to be touched by it though. My favorite part was where it said Don't cry, pray. If we could only remember that.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Gary another excellent poem really well written you draw the reader in and leave us wondering about the story behind your words